Tuesday, October 6, 2009
Why Don't you Pick on Somebody of Your Own Quantity.
Imagine being robbed in a damp dark alley. Just you between the robber and his goal to obtain your belongings. Fear stricken and at a dead end, it is inevitable that he will prevail. Now, imagine a lone robber and ten duplicates of yourself! Now the tables have turn and it is the robber who is fearful for his life. This power is not only useful to fighting crime but everyday things as well. With the power of duplication you can literally be in two places at once, or as many as you'd like! Want to go to the movies but school work needs to be done? No problem. Just let one of your doppelgangers take care of it. Need more players for a game of soccer? Duplicate! With doubles at your disposal anything is possible.
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Haha omg I love your title XD
ReplyDeletegood use of idea and good title
ReplyDeletegood introduction. I like the mugging situation you used to emphasize the abilities of your powers. Could elaborate a little more and make a little bit longer but overall quite enjoyable and interesting
ReplyDeleteThe imagery in the begining sucks people in, though I would say that you should make you explanation a little bit longer and talk about not just what you could do for fun with your power, but other things as well. You did have a couple spelling mistakes and a couple sentences needed a comma, but other than that, it was well thought and planned out.
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